kontro...aint heard u in a min kid...but anyways typign as I listen...singing in the opening is a nice touch fits build of beat...I heard this beat before its tight son..ncie choice here kid...liking how you opened....you delivery has gotten ALOT!!!better...lyrics is tupac simple but has that tupac writing style kinda pacish flow...but shit is working with ya flow...hook is ncie shawtie can sing...ok going into next beat..ok spitting on a mid 90's west coast beat...got that slow pronounced flow going it was alil robotic...u miscounted ya syllables in spots but all in all it was tight...good delivery u def stepped ya game up kid.....1


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