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Old 07-23-06, 04:24 PM   #13
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intro.... everyone has used this... pulp fiction... samuel jackson

beat... nice story beat....

verse one... simple flow... ehhh i've heard you do better....

hook.... nice... like da layers...

second verse... flow is much better here.... sounds like it goes from line to line a lot better and actually rides the beat better than frst verse....

hook again... sounds different when it comes in... i don't know...

third verse... flow falls off a lil here.... story is kool... some of the adlibs seem outta place or too loud.... it was aiight... not ya best but aiight....

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