Personally I wasn't really feeling L.I.'s verse. It felt artificial to me with the way that he had such contrasting vocabulary. Often it was more simplistic but then with lines like:

A river flows below my pupils. I slam the door
Each step down the stairs expresses my required support

That just sounds so fake to me, like who would ever phrase it like that? Eh, just alot of the wording I took issue with, although it did flow... I'm more for content over rhyme scheme any day. As for Led, I liked your piece. More poetic approach, the rhyme scheme could have been beefed up a bit being as this is an Om. Aside from that you had a very natural and fluent verse that I felt was very emotive and clearly depicted you stance as L.I.'s character's support system, or object of desire or whatever. Overall, this was a decent collab but I didn't really feel like the two styles really meshed too well.