ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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beat is some basic south shyt... nice....
yeah, came in a lil off on the first verse... flow is a lil choppy at times but they lyrics is straight...hook should be layered and turned down a bit...second verse is nice... flow is better here... third verse... pretty consistant.... lyrics are still decent.. no real fall offs here
i'd say the only real pitfall was the hook... ya adlibs were ok but still needed some minor adjusting overall i'd give this like an 8 outta 10...werd
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