what's hot:
shit son, that flow is ill
fuckin' awesome beat lol
hook is tight as fuck

what's coo:
emotion coo could be upped a bit

what's not:
quality lol

overall: Damn, dude. first time peepin' you, and shit is illness man. f'real. dope ass flow. keep at it. 9/10

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232068

EZ