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Old 07-25-06, 04:56 AM   #2
Ca'lam
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balance - this cat reminds me of a less polished version of F.A.T. .. nice tho. real smooth like, nice flow. lyrics was aight. nothin really jumped off, but i liked it cause the flow and simple changing rhyme scheme was good.

hook - its cool. just changed a phew words from original version.

shamrock - eh lackin when compared to other to cats. not bad tho. sound like they just started spitten. not bad. flow was aight. lyrics was lackin a lil bit, but we all need work right ?. not a bad effort.

past tense - for some reason i always thought you would sound way different.
flows on point till the very end. lyrics straight. solid verse overall. fit the track very well. nice drop


Solid track man
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