first off...
beat is POW POW POW
flow is ok...delivery is good...i reckon you could work on flow slightly...emotion is coo...up and down with the vocals and not volume wise but the way you pronounce ya words lol...hooks cool...BLAKA BLAKA...na man it's BLAP BLAP...tut tut...lyrics cool though
nice track flow could be better on this...but it was an ok joint...keep droppin
