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Old 07-25-06, 12:17 PM   #8
Dickard.
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Nick Fletcher-You didn't have to come hard, and you didn't. Had nice punches and some personals....not too hard hitting but enough to get the job done..in this verse i think ya flow was a lil chopped up so it was like..just get to the punch already...cuz a couple of lines was stretched...but you know wut ur doin. lol....ez.

rex-your punches were weak. no hate but you just have to come more creative and not force the "wordplay" or punch so much...work on ur structure too...with bad structure the reader cant get the flow which doesnt make ur punches as appealing..atleast to me....well then....

v/Nick fletcher.
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