O...yea, I heard this

lol

Cho...already gave you my feed on this...lyrics are intense and real because they are personal

One way to improve your verse is to ad lib it better...a few well timed/placed ad libs would make your verse pop some

nice tho


Jay...

vocal quality sounded a touch compressed

flow is nice...rhyming is good...however, compared to Cho's lyrics, yours seemed inconsequential.


Good tho


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