After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings
Cuz i'm ringin this faggot,
....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings

^only one i liked... barley.

Ken - wtf, ok first of all ..your problem is you use the word "like" as a comparison way too much. "like" disses aren't really that creative, and can result in many ways. cuz you could've said "like homo weddings" or "like homos getting married" or "like faggots protesting" ...and since it can resuly in so many ways and probably HAS resulted in these ways, this makes it sort of basic/played. so putting the word "like" in all of your punches and always using obvious comparisons is kind've wack to me imo.

vs.

get your gettin pwned in dis battle, but i geuss im gettin an L too
Cuz see your losin the battle, and im losin respect for you

^barley a quotable. more of a statement/self respectish punch.

We all know who's more experienced, so i gots da advantage,
Mal's known for throwin rocks @ herbs...
but we already take your words for granite,

^good, but its played. i've seen it on RB like 7 times with the granite wordplay ..i've seen it on a couple other sites as well. I've heard rappers on mainstream shit even use granite wordplay. since it's not original it makes it non-creative.

Mal - meh, you came pretty original, the problem is your wording. the way you word shit is just not harsh to anyone. and dunno about here, but on RB you're too stingy and high and mighty to listen to our tips. so listen, YOU NEED TO WORK ON WORDING! be more harsh/direct. be meaner to the opponent. cuss @ the dumbfucks. be aggressive! re-read your lines and ask yourself if they'd effect you in any way ..or if they'd sound like a lame overused diss. (also goes for ken`pho).

you guys'll get better. i got faith in ya ..just keep working on shit, take hints.

shitty battle but ..winner imo was,

v. Malicious, for more originality.

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