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Old 07-27-06, 02:10 AM   #2
Jay Rose
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lyrics were choppy....voice is good, quality needs work....you seem like you got skills, you just gotta polish them up

the second guy, is more refined....quality is a lil better, he kinda falls off a lil in the middle....

good shit tho, keep it up......

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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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