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Old 07-27-06, 01:04 PM   #11
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Voted For: Wordz Ahgod

Gkilla
Wordz ahGod my advice for you in this battle is STAY OUT
dude can't tell I'm above him, like this was Anne Frank's house
..........nice wordplay..........
you got no place with the best, your writtens are garbage kid
that's why there's no match for me here like imprisoned arsonists
............LOL nice punch and terrific wordplay....
GK is a monster kid, fags on pins & needles puttin out his best work
I'm pushing ur buttons while u trying to sew em back to ur dress shirt
.....so..so.............
I take the diamonds and purses, everyone knows that you're worthless
and I'm number one, like the amount of decent lines in your verses
......weak.....
I'll put Wordz to 'work' how I 'punch him in', I'll sun this kid
He must love L's as much as Busta Rhymes 'Loves His Bitch'
....Good...

overall your lines were good and your punchez were on this was a good battle and hard to decide i liked your wordplay but its like you came hard in the begining and then you slacked off near the end I think thats what cost you my vote dont take it personal jus a thought

Wordz Ahgod

im not gonna breakdown your verse you know that your verse was kinda sloppy with the lines and I dint feel like dealing with them lines .......................overall though your punchez were constans and strong and I think thats what gave you the edge in this battle you came strong all the way and you held it and you toke it al the way /.................

my v/ goes to Wordz

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