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Old 07-27-06, 02:18 PM   #24
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Voted For: Czar Bishop

631
It takes him seven days to write a verse cuz his spits-are-weak (week).....
And only five of those days during the month is when he hits-a-streak (his period).....
...........Nice...........
Dude only lives up to half his name..he BI
His rhymes are worse than a crackhead comin off his high
......................Weak..............
Oh yea he's real hard..the home of the gay cowboys and lonestars
Only time he comes up with major figures is when he dials his phonecalls
..................Goood...............
Joined in Feb. and dont have a record..why should i fear ya?
Bishop couldnt see me in RV even if he was standin next to me in a mirror
..................weak...................

overall man you did a good job not all your lines were great but your punchez were good just not constant ............and your personals were average nuttin specail .......

Czar
Fuckin with my 'psalmns' should be a 'sin'*
Fuckin with me like he thought I had a wack twin
....weak....and its spelled Psalms...
I pull punchlines, your lines are 'pickups' without the 'sticks'
I'm amazed he can say 631, he can't even count to six!**
...Nice personal and nice punch...
Prolly cuz he can't think of anymore lines to drop
When I hustle on my corner is the only time I get 'Writer's Block'***
...........Good..............
You 'call the cops', and I call it 'takeout'
Cuz, when the pigs come, I eat ya and call it a 'steakout'
.....nice.....
Okay, stats raised. Well this merkin was fun
I see your still finishin ya 'circle', not even on 'square-one'.
....lol nice and new.....

Overall man you came wit some originality your first line was weak though but other than that your lines and punchez were constant and strong your personals were on and you came very original

my v./ CZzar

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