yea you shoulda started rapping wayyyyyyyyyyy sooner.....
turn your dubs down alot, your stuffing a lil....flow its a lil forced at points, but your new to the sayin it part....
go read a tut on quality....n shit you could benifit alot from quality.....
you got no where to go but up but try n polish it all up tho.....
rtf on myspace girls yo -
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232428
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead