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Old 07-27-06, 05:49 PM   #10
Wordz AhGod
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Voted For: Oz.

CherryBluntZ learn to follow the rulez. Im choosing to DQ your verse because you were too lazy to go atleast 10 lines.

Yall Sit And Watch Me "Smoke CherryBluntz" Like It's "For the Occasion"
Nigga Only Has One and a Lost To Match....He Must've Went On Vacation
DIDN'T REALLY LIKE THESE LINES FOR AN OPEN, FIRST LINE WAS OK THOUGH

Man U couldnt "Overcome" me even If you "fucked 5 Girls" To my One
And We'll See just How Strong Your Punchez are To My Gun
2ND LINE WAS GUNPLAY TALK WHICH ISN'T GOOD FOR TEXT BATTLE COZ ITS BEEN PLAYED SINCE DAY ONE. 1ST LINE WAS OK AGAIN.

Yo Ass must Be in Your Throat Bcuz U Always Talkin Shit
Even If you Put My "Drool In a bottle" You Still couldnt "Top My Spitz"
DECENT BUT IT'S NOT WORDED RIGHT

Ill "Knock Out Your Brain" and Give Your Dumb Ass "Mental Spaces"
He Mad Bcuz People Read My Verse and Sleep On His Like Pillow Cases
BEST LINES SO FAR. OK.
He Takes Little bites off other ppl'z Verses and Calls it a mixed bag
The Rules Strictly Said No recycling So why is he comin wit Dat Trash
COULD HAVE BEEN WORDED A LOT BETTER.

Oz. you came kinda weak but Candycoatedbluntz had no structure or flow at all, and he didnt meet the minimum requirments. Since he didn't put the time to drop atleast 10 lines. I wont even put the time to write about it or even concider droping feed for it. Oz. Your structure and flow is ok but you just need to focuse a lot more on making your punches and wordplays more creative. you got potencial but stuff like gunplay and simple punches aint gonna help you much man.

Structure - Oz.
Punches - Oz.
Metaphores - none
Wordplay - Oz.
Flow - Oz.

V/ Oz.
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