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I don't lose
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IP:
singing is a lil flat....not bad tone but flat.....you shoulda calmed down on the rappin part....woulda worked with the beat, with a smooth chill style....the lyrics were deepish but not taht well constructed....production is good, your almost there, just a lil more focus n your good.....
rtf on myspace girls...
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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