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Old 07-27-06, 06:17 PM   #11
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Voted For: Oz.

Cherrybluntz-gotta update ya style....you had some okay content..but as for the structure no one on this site will vote for you becuz its whack/played out and not usefull...so just enhance it and read other ppls shit and catch on ...no hate...you had like 1 good attempt for a punch...gutta step up..overall....3/10

oz.-You had some good stuff...lines a bit stretched but nothing to bad...you had a couple noticable lines that ill mention...good punches here and there...still seein some whack wordplay...but some of it was good overall you took this easily no doubg 5/10

Yo Ass must Be in Your Throat Bcuz U Always Talkin Shit
Even If you Put My "Drool In a bottle" You Still couldnt "Top My Spitz"
Ill "Knock Out Your Brain" and Give Your Dumb Ass "Mental Spaces"
He Mad Bcuz People Read My Verse and Sleep On His Like Pillow Cases

vs.

nothing


v/oz.

rtf in sig please...thanks.
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