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Old 07-27-06, 11:38 PM   #9
VatoXL
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Listen'n


feelin the beat from the gate...

anything real is dope son....its all emotion an feelin'...

1st: Lyrically u killed it....vocals was too low...beat over-rides it....your dubs coulda bin turned down....

hook: proper...like the concept an the way u approached it

2nd:but these past 10 years ive bin pushin right thru/but the only girl i ever commited to was u....that was the high-light for me doggy....good shit fam

sorry to hear bout the lose son momma then grandmomma....god bless an let they souls rest peacefully they in a better place...i had to accept that shit also dog when i lost my brother an his girlfriend they was only 19

its hard but stay focused...holla at yo boy...100
my rating 10/10
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