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Old 07-28-06, 07:25 AM   #8
Ca'lam
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aight. first time me checkin out ya work.




hook - sounds good. but i cant really hear it. its reaaaaaaal low. all i hear is the last note haha.


verse - low also. ya flow is not bad. first time i hear a chick on rv with a flow. so thats a plus. real surpriced actually.


other than the volume levels and maybe some mixing. track was not bad. always room for improvement, yahmean ?. keep droppin girl


return the feed when you get a chance ma
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232476
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