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Old 07-28-06, 10:43 AM   #11
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
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IP:

ur provoken the truth..see there's no hope for the dude
the links don't lie...to bad the people who vote for you do

vs.

...Especially when my opponent is dumb as shit
I told him there was a fine line between dopeness
...and he tried to hit on it

Defcon, Original is the kinda name more than 1 person could have and I'm pretty sure this Original isn't the one from before. Given that, it hurt ya verse that ya focused on it so much. Opener was cool though, ERA line was almost quotable, seems like ya didn't care to try to be too fresh in this but you were fairly consistent.

Original, wording was just much far inferior to Defcon's. The fine line thing, I've seen that concept used, but you flipped it differently and I thought it was pretty cool. Really inconsistent verse tho, first two concepts were kinda played, mouth arrest was too, and the closer was...ewww, lol. You can do better than this, I've seen it.

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