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Old 07-28-06, 11:53 AM   #6
DaTrusHurtz
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Fuck'a long verse. I'm wastin' my time with this...
Yo...didn't anybody tell u that wack niggas get 12 lines or less?
I lost 2 champ matches, but that aint embarrassin'...
It's actually funny, coz my losses are more impressive than ur wins
And ya attempts at nameplay are old and dull...
Till now, I didn't think it was possible to drop 18 without a quotable
Yeah, I can see u love me. But hey, I'm fond of girls...
I'm straighter than the line thats about to be on ya heart moniter
When I saw ur skill level, I gasped in amazement...
There's no question, u are one of a kind...the last of the cavemen

vs.

prick, your talk is old news-jaw squeaks muffle your vocals
& how the fuck u are somebody here but a nobody among da locals

Shake, ya verse seemed very effortless and like you really thought he was wack and weren't just sayin' it. Pretty cool verse. Nasdeey, flow was fine and the concepts ya use aren't necessarily that bad, just ya don't use them well and the wording always comes out very indirect, so work on that.

Vote - Shake
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