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Old 07-28-06, 02:29 PM   #85
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Well seeing as you keep moaning about why you aint getting in and such i thought id break in down for you

see,im too quick & you too slow-
like swingin' if you was in shoulda height water
cuz ill leave ya 'Face-down',like i left tails face-up on a quarter

thats self-praise your saing "i" do shit, which aint dissing at your oppenent which is what a whole verse is suppose to do


an when you see me comin you betta -movie it-dude-
cuz i been known ta re-arrange a face like -arubic's-cube-

again self-praise,

an i send caution- cuz when i stunt it'll make ya show-hate
& if ya come at me son
ill leave ya wit more -cuts- then a 'paper snowflake'

again self-praise

& i no ya jokin bout the gun in ya raps,thats why im laughin' after-em
cuz the only pistol(piss-stall) you've seens in ya public -bathroom

not self praise, but concepts not all that, saying i aint seen a pistol? the word plays good but its not harsh at all, try and aim your punches at your oppenent and then im sure datrus will let you in one day,

Peace
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