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Old 07-29-06, 07:52 PM   #2
Jay Rose
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the clip ended pretty sudden .....need to fix that....didnt like the hook at the begning....meh just me

the dude flows pretty nice.....could be a lil more confident tho.....

i dont really like the hook.....its like a bad rip off of lil john

the second guy/ eh, didnt really feel it much

i told you on aim my speakers ehre suck so it doesnt sound too good all n all
but your verse was the best flow and annunciation.....i cant tell you too much more abuot it till i listen to it later
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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