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Old 07-30-06, 02:15 PM   #19
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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this was a good song only thing negative i could point out is the line where you say time to be a man you come in a little too loud thats all really lol
flow loved your flow you switched it up throughout the whole song which was dope and kept me interested
your chorus is amazing you sing better than any male to hit rv and female for that matter really lol chrous was definately felt

i liked all 3 verse but i felt the 3rd one more i mean i cant imagine what its going to be like leaving my sisters
your delvery and emotion were all good too props i think this is the best song to hit rv i downloaded it
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