im feelin the beat...

ahh you def. seem like your starting to get a lot more comfy behind the mic...your delivery is getting better....different pitches in your voice and what not...

flow is good..never really falls off at all...good job on that...multies are nice....

kinda seems like you upped your quality a lil bit too...maybe some diff mixing?....

hook is kinda catchy...maan..i definitely like your music better now that your on some original beats....

lyrics are coo...nothin stood out to me like whoa or anything...but its not like you were trying to dish out mad punches on this type of subject here...

overall man..good job on this...keep it up

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