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Flyweight
From: TreeCity, Pistolvania |
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IP:
Listen'n lol....lil jon beats aight.....
1st: Lyrics is dope...like the shit u was sayin concept is nice....but average feel me gots to get more creative wit...lil more emotion' would'a made that shit...crazy....
Hook: No offense was wackk...
2nd: Lyrics simple....got a lil more emotion than the first dude....couldnt really understand you on some parts...but thats just the way u rapped it....
I hatin' doggy dont think i am im just here to help u improve on what u need to improve so dont take to heart bout me sayin the hook was wackk...not that it is wack just the way y'all spit it was wack....
but raw material is raw material feel me... so i hope to hear more from u homie....
over-all my rating 5/10
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