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Old 07-31-06, 08:17 PM   #3
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Not a bad track, but I don't think it's even close to your best by far. Your hooks have definitely been getting better, but the actual verses seemed a little lack luster to me. I noticed a couple of punch ins in the first verse that I'm not used to hearing from you. I don't know if you got lazy or what, but it just didn't seem like you. This would be cool for a mixtape, but I think it needs a little work on the first verse. Second verse was straight, but it seemed pretty repetetive, like with the flow and shit. Just didn't keep me intrested for too long. I think it might just be that I'm used to hearing more upbeat, faster tempo songs from you. I don't know.....

Good shit though
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