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Old 07-31-06, 09:42 PM   #2
SlicKnife
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Im just gonna be honest man, not heard anything yet, but take my criticism and use it! n dont question my experience, since I have made beats in the past - not for long, but I have....

SlowMotion - honestly, you might call it SlowMotion...but it was so bad, I wish it went faster - nothings working, before anything you need a good melody/tune and this doesnt have it...those strings are as annoying as fuck too, and so is that pluck thing - I dont know what to suggest, since I dont see any potential in it

Take This - now this beat, actually has some potential - again, I hate your use of sounds and instruments....try experimenting with different sounds, ones that actually sound good and work together and this might sound decent - also, drums are pretty good but I dont like that hi-hat in there...seriously, use some better sounds and work on this

Dead Inside - Probably your best beat of the three, it sounds a lot more fuller and complete than the other two at least - though, you really need to change those drums man! they spoil this song, try something more softer as well...they just irritate you throughout the song....yeh, so change those annoying drums and youll have a decent beat here!!!

Word....shit might be harsh, but it should help you
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