shoulda punched in the la la la's in the hook. kept the last la a lil longer for an overlap woulda been tighter....but it was nice....liked how you came in the first verse.....the second verse didnt come in as hard.....its a good song, just doesnt sound like something you care about and it doesnt seem your in an angry mood, so it just sounds like its missing something.....the track is good, but it needs more time put into it, its like one of those almost there tracks....but an almost there track for you is like a 8/10 for the rest of the kids here......good shit. but i expect more from you

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