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Old 08-02-06, 04:14 AM   #7
DNGRX
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Illeyes
Death comes easy, son don't turn around from your fears.
& Your in love with life..
..But dude, I can even tell it's been cheating on you for years
Coulda been decent, wording wasn'r harsh enough for me though

Wyte
Punch was wack, basically you said im in love with life
Yeah my life cheated on me...
………...With your fuckin wife
Yeah you coulda of flipped it better, comes off as your dissing yourself


Okay you had a nice punch, u suck and you aint tough
And saying……........^…..^…
…Just means yours wasn’t harsh enough
played concept

Illeyes
You've never won awards.. nonoone'll even mention this queer...
so writing in white must be the fuckin HIGHLIGHT of your career
So-so punch

Even, though I liked Illeyes final bar which won it for me.Wyte sort of just lost due to not flipping the 1st bar harsh enough & dropping a played one next.

V/Ill
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