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Old 08-02-06, 05:55 AM   #9
Ca'lam
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aiight..


first - lyrics aight. flow is pretty decent. good shit on that.

hook - its a nice idea. but just wasnt pulled off like it was planned to.


second - lyrics remind me of carsonjt for some reason. flow is coo. not a bad verse. could use some work tho.




overall track was a cool listen. could work on ya developin ya'll styles more, but we were all at that point yah'mean ?

keep droppin
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