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Old 08-02-06, 09:40 AM   #8
DaTrusHurtz
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^^ - To anyone seeing this, this was a good vote because it was well explained. Everyone should vote like this. Anyway

Death comes easy, son don't turn around from your fears.
& Your in love with life..
..But dude, I can even tell it's been cheating on you for years
The use of the concept was not that original, but it was okay, it did hit him

Punch was wack, basically you said im in love with life
Yeah my life cheated on me...
………...With your fuckin wife
okay, the idea was good for a follow-up, but doesn't make sense the way ya worded it cuz his wife would be cheating on him, not you, if you guys were doin' shit
Okay you had a nice punch, u suck and you aint tough
And saying……........^…..^…
…Just means yours wasn’t harsh enough
I like ^^^ punches, but I felt this was just a bit bland and not really that witty

You've never won awards.. nonoone'll even mention this queer...
so writing in white must be the fuckin HIGHLIGHT of your career.
doesn't really work because you don't highlight with white, you highlight with yellow, orange, blue...

Overall, battle was okay but a bit rushed as you guys didn't really think about the meanings on a few of your punches as you both had a punch which might have seemed good and the concept was good, but the execution of it didn't make much sense. However, when comparing the other bars, I think Ill's first bar was better than Wyte's 2nd bar and that slightly gave him the edge.

Vote - Ill Eyes
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