ok so i see 2 punches w/ good concepts that needed some better wording and 2 punches that'll decide who my vote goes to.

Im wrecking guys, take to the field kid watch the weapons fly
I'm throwing stiks to the ground like my dog needed the exercise
^^^the only reason i didnt really like this is because you said stiks when artistik's name doesnt have an "s" at the end. and yea i know what u meant but its your job to make the wording as crisp as possible

see you freshed up the worplay.. it had me laughing 's no doubt..
that we all kno NT's been played man.. since XP had came out
^^^dth said it was played, i've never seen it before so as far as im concerned this bar was fuckin dope

it's go time n you have no rhymes, just admit to my damn throne
n i peeped all off your punches.. on the waiting list to get thrown
^^bad wording mayne, i get what your saying but it's sorta hard to understand until i read it like 2 or 3 times

^^should throw that dirt far, Quotes in a 1-2? lmao son your the worst par
NT's played man <--- and i mean that lame concept in your 1st bar
eh not very witty but your worded it so that it hit a bit harsher. i dont really like these sort of concepts so eh

v/ philly

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