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Old 08-02-06, 11:08 PM   #17
marvILLous
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Death comes easy, son don't turn around from your fears.
& Your in love with life..
..But dude, I can even tell it's been cheating on you for years
this was weak too.. wasn't hard hittin

You've never won awards.. nonoone'll even mention this queer...
so writing in white must be the fuckin HIGHLIGHT of your career.
yea this was decent, punch of the battle

vs

Punch was wack, basically you said im in love with life
Yeah my life cheated on me...
………...With your fuckin wife
naw man, this was a weak play off his name

Okay you had a nice punch, u suck and you aint tough
And saying……........^…..^…
…Just means yours wasn’t harsh enough
this was too simple, and not really witty at all. also, i didn't like ur set up. u say he had a nice punch.. then u say, he sucks and aint tough.. i duno, i thought you could've just executed it better.

simply, ill had the punch of the battle, and that took it for him.

v/ ill eyes
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