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Old 08-03-06, 01:49 PM   #8
Malicious
Flyweight
 
Posts: 108
This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.

IP:

Now look,
Ya boys have done tattled.. told me you suck, so I'll leave ya rhymes rattled
I seen ya played nameplay 'n' weak punch from a quote..
.. and that was just in ya fuckin punchline battle!
meh
I'm cloutin you son.. here's a dollar, 'coz no doubt you's a bum
And I'm out-livin this trash, as opposed to ure ass still livin out of some
o.k
See me dump the lines.. and you, deal with the fact that you suck at rhymes
Then watch me drop some A-material.. and crush some at the same fuckin time
nice
This fuckin whore's soft.. and against him, poor punches I'm seein more of
With his verse resemblin' a rodeo... as it rides the bull and then falls off
dont rhyme, meh
I'll bomb my way through with punches that'll be straight rockin this jew
And you'll get hit with such a heavy cross, jesus'll feel sorry for you
o.k