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Old 08-04-06, 03:46 AM   #9
M&rk
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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher.
yeah, i called you a faggot.. i think you justa bitch who claiming clout
cuz i saw this picture book..as a kid..and ripped the pages out

VS.

go get a plane ticket cuz yo ugly ass needs outta here dude
and be sure its stand by.......
...to make up for the girls that woudn't ever do that near you
only 5 barz?.. muphucka u gotta be kiddin if u think thats enough
cuz i'll kilometer so much.. a 1000 of ya'll bitches couldn't measure up


Yeah, this was weak. Meters dropped utter trash and then picture basically dropped what was needed to win this. That kilometer line was pretty ILL to. And the rest of your verse wasn't too bad... just some poor wording.

V/ - picture

if you would....
..
pm the barz u thought i worded wrong.. it'd help me elevate... preciate it.. cuz i hate thinkin i got a dope concept and end up messin it up ya dig
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