this was koo. i see you took your time on this piece and that you put alot of thought in to this aswell nick. nice man i liked this here are some quotales i may say


And then it creeps,
Unsuspecting,
Thoughts of the dark one.
The child of hatred,
Its vengeance springs forth.

And so it is frozen,
A weary soul,
Caught between the pull.
The endless battle.
It rages, it lingers,
Until nothing is left.

The spirit dies.

The vessel crumbles.

An empty void remains.
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this was a nice ending aswell man...nice wordings.

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