ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
From: ATL..still reppin' NYC |
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listening....
ok... first things first.... didn't expect a slow beat hear... this was REEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAL laid back...werd.... kool choice, though
Jay... hmmmm... you sound a lil tinny on the track.... lyrics were cool... but what ya need to work on is making ya lines flow more fluently.... it's kinda like ya jumped around a lil bit... ya stayed on topic but it seemed as if some things didn't flow well together... overall it was pretty decent though
Tito...wow... ya story telling ability is crazy on this.... always liked ya flow... i'd tone down the libs a lil bit... they just as loud as ya main vocals...lol... i could actually visualize a nukka trying to find some weed and all the dealers are talking about how they ain't got none...lol.. good shyt
calam....omg!!!... i don't know what verse i liked best!... ya did ya thang on this too.... ya didn't look at it as if it were a person like jay and tito did but you did throw a reference in there... ya shyt still flowed on point and ya lines fed into each other... which is what i was tryna to get across to jay on his part... liked your visualization also.... good shyt, yall... and whenever y'all nukkaz wanna collab just holla...
jay... i ain't forget ya man.... i still got yours on deck!!!
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