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Old 08-04-06, 04:12 PM   #10
DaTrusHurtz
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I listened to a couple of ya tracks... made me burp up bile
quit the rap game.........
.....cuz RV knows U on Myspace as a part-time pedophile
This was pretty eh. Concept was just too bland

MiSk in the first round? Meh....ain't a biggie
I'll have him staring at 3 from the heat more than L.I's siggy
Also kinda eh. Like after reading the punchline, it's just not a mean diss, nah mean?

And last 1-2 I ended your career like hocus pocus
What's worse than you not being here since?.......no one noticed
setup to the punch coulda been improved, but the end punchline was kinda cool

Talk about punches floppin'... ya ghostwriter must of forgot to drop
stop playin' pretend gangsta wit ya daughter
.................................................. ..only ghetto u see is in photoshop
You coulda made a cool punch outta the photoshop idea, but nah at this, just looked rushed

Misk, first off, sorry about the loss, if you don't get links in don't worry about it. But, you shouldn't make excuses for your bars, it just makes them look worse. Anyway, didn't like Engyma's first bar, but his 2nd was the best line of the battle and what won him this.

Vote - Engyma
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