ok never heard u before so this should be interesting

beat is kinda cool i guess.

you come in real cool with the talkin in the beginning. the chorus is kinda simple and lacks creativity. quality is alright.

first verse your lyrical game is alright. it sounds like youre tryin too hard to push the punchlines out there. your voice sounds like your whining.

again same thing for the chorus.

2nd verse your flow is the same but its alright cause its smooth and not choppy. again with the punchlines.

the 3rd verse is kinda the exact same as the first 2


you did good lyrically. a lot of punchlines and a few good ones in the mix so that was cool. the only thing i didnt like about this was the chorus. jus work on a little more creativity with that and you'll be set