Voted For: GKillaz05

Punches leave ya 'burned' like the 'sun' your trapped this time...
Couldnt even spit something' 'hott', if you 'rapped outside'...
I liked this openner - 2nd bar was nice

I get wins like cars without a roof chump gats leave u slumped...
Fuckin' Fighter?....
Like ray charles atta bar... I never seen this "fruit punch"...
first line was filler but 2nd was decent

Gimme ya best hit, u dont change rap styles u change-sexes...
'Swooshing-A-Shot' at a parks only time u make the "net-flip"...
2 good lines

Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
1st was filler, 2nd was str8

Im a "G Killa", so in this battle there is no need to merk you...
You cant spit a 9:10, because thats past this youngins cerfew...
decent closer...


Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
recycled but still a dope line...

I'll smash you faggot.. and have you fallin' G
With such a dope haymaker.. I'll have all the farmers calling me
ok punch

I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
didn't really like this line

Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
ok line

I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!
decent punch

This was a str8 battle, but I was feeling GKs shit the most coz he had some ill lines. Nick had someshit but I've seen most of it before really so I wasn't surprised or astounded by it being in here.

Personals - none
Metaphores - Gkillaz
Punches - Gkilaz
Structure and Flow - Gkillaz
Wordplay - Gkillaz

V/ Gkillaz05

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