View Single Post
Old 08-04-06, 04:47 PM   #13
Lyrically Gifted
New to RV
 
Posts: 57
This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.

IP:

Aight look,
Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
I'll smash you faggot.. and have you fallin' G
With such a dope haymaker.. I'll have all the farmers calling me
I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!


aight all i gotta say is self glory with that verse all you talked about is what you cant or TRY and do...no real hard punches or personals so that in my books was a weak verse... but thats nothin a little elevating cant fix
__________________