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Old 08-04-06, 09:35 PM   #12
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Voted For: Kirk

u talk a lot of shit, but i'm bout to beat u badly
.. shots have ya head rockin' - sorta like ya avy.
this was weak man, concept is played to fuck to..
raw like a cavity. i'm a boss, this tha sequel
now Kirk like Franklin - searchin' for Gods people.
again, this was weak... too basic..
i'm to evil, so after this i'm leaving u for the dead
your coffin? - I .Burn it Down. like your signature says.
the concept was cool... but you didn't execute the hard punch with it..
and ur fucking stupid, thinking it's okay for some1 to bite
that person is as worthless, as your 3,500+ posts at this site.
this was just gay..NO..
I'm Rated-R like a movie .. look it^ and u can find it
.......... ur just PG rated, like Kirk Hinrich.
choppy.. and weak..


VS.


When I'm done with you I'll rip kin, It'll be farewell,
Oriole B-More predictable................... And just C A L,
played yo... fuck the L lines..
Callin' me Capitan Kirk... Well, man... Bring on the fights,
Cause when I Trek on ya face, how the fuck you gonna klingon to life?
lmao, dope way to use ure own name... wordplay was nice..
You better go 20 cause you'll need it... I'm tight with pens,
And theres no u in victory... But there sure is an I in win,
this was corny.. but ok..
Whats the definition of an addict? People say I match it well,
Only because I drop E... Right after I pass the L,
fuck, another L line...
Bitch, your name explains my verse... Stupid, I'm serious,
Cause I'll beat the fucking shit out of Euthanize... PERIOD.
nice, although I used this concept on Mimesis before..


Word, this was one-sided to fuck. Euth, I seen you drop way better and your verse was just complete ass. It was basic as hell in most parts, the wording wasn't the best and overall it just lacked any sense of creativity. The only bar where you had a decent concept, you completely fucked it up by just dropping some basic generic ass shit with it.
Kirk, man... I almost didn't vote for you for dropping TWO "L" LINES. What the fuck!! LMAO!! Anyway.. the star trek bar was your best... it was a nice, creative way of using your own name against Euth. I liked the no U in victory bar.. that was cool, although worded a little sloppy. And the closer was nice, I used the concept myself before. It was a cool way to finish off a verse I know you didn't really try on.


V/ - Kirk


RTF!! Hoecakes!!
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^Word, hit that shit... and I'll see you on the Enterprise.
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