this niggas different, seem to not like the rest of the nation
cuz the only time L.I.'s happy, is from gay rights Legal investigation
eh, this was a pretty weak nameplay, just wasn't witty

wow a gay punch. an obvious herb move in late time
this fag needs a sobriety test to help him drop a straight line
wouldn't be good, but the feed makes it a pretty decent punch
D ya too easy. luckily ive been patient
plenty of people are ownin DS. .all over the nation
seen this same line on him and another dude with DS initials, woulda been good tho if it was more fresh

this bitch is on the move, till i slaped the bitch with a bus, all u can do is trick it
u got a long wat to go, but L.I. could move far...only if he had the right ticket
punch was setup to be good, okay concept just wasn't use that harshly

DS, the first punch was just not funny. Your 2nd, saying he needs the right ticket to move far is okay, but you coulda used this concept better. Try brainstorming more ideas next time. LI, DS idea was kinda played, but the sobriety test shit was a good feed and imo won this for you.

Vote - LI