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Old 08-05-06, 08:39 AM   #9
DaTrusHurtz
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Umm, Dread, you were supposed to drop 2 punches together, not wait for him, lol. Since ya messed up, Tortilla could DQ you if he wants and take the win. If he doesn't indicate he wants a DQ though, the voting of this battle can carry on as regular. Anyway....

ya bout to get hammered, but theres somethin i gotta hand ya
Dread poses a HUGE threat ......a pussie on AND off the camera
wording coulda been a bit better, but I thought this concept was pretty cool

fuck this queer, dude's str8 gay yo he kicks it at a gay bar..
he's the type to jump in a pool- when asked for a spar
you shoulda put a multi on this, woulda improve flow a lot, but anyway, thought this punch was eh

fool dont do due dates, and he dont take orders neither ..
s'right, kid doesn't ever follow ......the fucking rules either!
You shoulda put more about the word follow in the setup.. coulda been worded better again, but decent personal

im feining for a snack, it seems i found one, im gonna win
cpz if chip is from in the bag....ill just rip it open & eat him
not a bad line, just a bit unoriginal and uncreative

Tortilla had good concepts, but his wording was off a bit in both. Dreaded just came a bit bland and wasn't as witty though so I felt Tortilla got this.

Vote - Tortilla Chip
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