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Old 08-05-06, 08:42 AM   #8
Appocolyptik
Beginning Your Ending
 
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He DOES have the final of the LLL which probably takes precedence over this, but anyway I'll give you some feedback.


Ya gonna eat ya words, cuz that's the gayest shit that I've heard
So you'd eat a Spoonful of shit...but would ya eat your WHOLE verse
Even though it was a personal it was played, decent flip though
You arrived on the scene bitchin' so what's the deal bum
We all saw ya Preface, we're just waitin' for it to mature into a real one
Not really harsh
K, I'll stop talkin' 'bout ya in the mag, but don't tell me ya not a puss
I'll only speak on one condition, but you'll always be anonymous
Eh, coulda been executed better
Shitty week eh? Decompress n' relax, but then I'm gonna pound 'em
N' when I take out Com ^^^, it's easy to see how people feel around him
Meh coulda been dope, but again poorly executed
Ya girl looks like a dyke son, n' yea dissin' this guy's fun
I'm havin' a Whale of a time, you just have a wife that looks like one
LOL, nice personal
Ya crew voted 4-0 for, non-crew 4-1 against, so die fool
Ya get Saved By The Crew so much, you resemble a sitcom on high school
Solid personal
Damn!!! Even the mod smacked ya n' you were livid n' yes
Your verse was Degraded, but honestly dawg I'd have gave it an F
Nice again
Always gettin' dickrode, fag ya skills are the worst to date
You get LOTS of special treatment...
...that mixes up ya kids on which pills they should take
Not feeling
So no one's scared when ya gunnin', n' ya hint that ya frontin'
And I saw ya shadow of skill...
...that groundhogs would use to prove spring is comin'
You should have made this into a Shadow/Sonic punch if you were going to use Hedgehogs
Bitch we agree that ya too borin', n' hoe I deliver true whorin's
You're so Engulfed in losing, you could destroy what's left of New Orleans
Lol good closer

Quotables

Ya girl looks like a dyke son, n' yea dissin' this guy's fun
I'm havin' a Whale of a time, you just have a wife that looks like one
Ya crew voted 4-0 for, non-crew 4-1 against, so die fool
Ya get Saved By The Crew so much, you resemble a sitcom on high school
Damn!!! Even the mod smacked ya n' you were livid n' yes
Your verse was Degraded, but honestly dawg I'd have gave it an F
Bitch we agree that ya too borin', n' hoe I deliver true whorin's
You're so Engulfed in losing, you could destroy what's left of New Orleans

Well you started out pretty weak admittedly, with wording letting you down, but had a solid section in the middle with 3 back to back quotables. Then again you had some eh punches and finished with a nice line. Overall I'd say not your best, and I think you know it. But I guess you haven't battled in a while and you're shaking off the rust, so to speak.
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