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Old 08-05-06, 02:40 PM   #4
Jayson
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hmm alright nice piece bro you aswell got to step your vocab up try to find something that really rhymes structure was alright could be better the flow was okay alot of lines sounded stretched when i rapped it out fix that man pretty good piece not to deep but okay keep up the work
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