Middle Weight
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IP:
im never happy beat ya ass dude i'll do it with a frown
cuz you have Tons of heart.....but still cant hold it down
fuck up this bitch cuz amount of lines i have left are just a few
cuz how you gonna make it to the 'final four'
....................when my first 6 lines destroyed you
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nothing special about you. average, inbetween, yeah.. dude's par..
you've had some elevation, but nobody gives a flying fuck who you are.
This was an ok battle. Test you have a wording problem man, I mean you used 'cuz' twice in one of your lines<<<<that sucks. The bars I quoted were good though, the last one sounds bit because this is a permanent league and there are no play-offs. Nbro (how the fuck do u pronounce that shit) some of your lines were okish but nothing good enough to quote apart from the last bar. Yeh, just keep improvin n shit...
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