ok, vocab needs to be upp'd. Instead of starting lines with the same word, use a descriptive word.
try keep each bar the same syllble count, makes for better text flow and smoother read.
try some multis and a diffrent rhyme scheme from "end line rhymes."

Alot of your lines are stretched.
I like the concept of this line:
this shit is like before a boxing match cause it havent hit me yet

but you didnt excecute it with the rest of that bar.
overall, i see you have potential to be a solid writer, just need to think outside the box, read some other open mics and get a general idea of how to format and lay out your work and you will be dope.

keep dropping bro.