this is ok.
I like your vocab, it adds a solid touch to any open mic. I feel in this though you rushed the end, cause it seemed to lack at the end, but either way its still cool.
My multis are better

but this has some solid bars in it. I actaully spat this, and was easy to flow to, so your structure is safe.
good drop fam, one of this best ive read today.
stay up.
AI